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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2008-02-11 09:54 PM

Long Distance (For One Low Weekly Price)

I've won the part of inappropriate fool,
its driving
you mad. At night
the inconsistant beating of my heart
propells the music at this
casual ball (or play).
The occasion calls
but never recieves an answer,
I'm quite busy. (playing the)
Fool.

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-11 10:02 PM

Very nice Alex. I got more from this one than usual! Great write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2008-02-11 10:04 PM

Thank you earl. If you have any suggestions, I'm open ears. You are one of the few people that I think can help with abstract writing on this teen board.

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-11 10:12 PM

Me?!? Suggestions?!? Abstract writing??! You must be joking!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2008-02-11 10:23 PM

haha not at all. You have the art of disconnection figured out. Seriously, if you have suggestions, I'd love to hear them.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-11 10:36 PM

wow this is really good. i love reading your abstract poems. there fun to read =) good work!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-02-11 11:16 PM

WOAH!!! another amazazing write!!! Love it.... just.. ugh!! yooh blow me away Alex!!!hehe
Krysti

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

7 posted 2008-02-12 12:18 PM

thank you both for reading...

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

8 posted 2008-02-15 07:15 PM

hey hey,
Wowsers! you are my favouritest! man, i wish i could write that good!(huh)...sigh. i love it. you r amazing!
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

9 posted 2008-02-17 07:02 PM

oh thank you. its always nice to have new readers.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

10 posted 2008-02-17 10:34 PM

ahahahah so cute, i loved it- been reading your stuff- just not commenting, but you're doing an amazing job (as per usual

so what shall ye do next ye sicaphantic fool?(wow i spelt that one right with out any help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! three cheers for the spelling challenged Kate!!!!!!!!!!!)

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

11 posted 2008-02-17 10:38 PM

haha yes three cheers to kate!!! hahaha!!!!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

12 posted 2008-02-19 12:10 PM

haha...thanks kate. I'm glad you've been reading.

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