Teen Poetry #8 |
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ship wreak |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
my nose is running, my eyes are bleeding, hanging onto the flotsam, cause the light house is receeding. when u tossed me overboard, just to lighten the load, i screamed for your arms would you really do this? no. i tell myself this, just so i can dismiss, you as the bad guy, what did you mean, with each kiss? i'm wet and cold, sea salt stings my throat, as i suck in a breath, so that i can stay afloat. my body hits the rocks, as i clean off ocean froth i look out into sea, did your vessal reach the docks? i see a figure on the divident beach lawn and see you there but when i call, you're gone. a goast you seemed, again you found me, and when i reached out you screamed. my scars and bruises screech, though i'm dead as each, of the rocks that i haunt on this abandoned beach. if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
This reminds me of Twilight. When Bella's drwoning. Good job...though it mad me sad. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
this had some good moments of imagery, however the spelling errors made this a little hard to read. keep writing! |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey hey, srry, i was planning on writing a note to warn of errors. thanx fer reading anywho. !Tracey! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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