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In Lace Golden with Time
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In Lace Golden with Time |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
In Lace Golden with Time My Love, the world is closing Furling into its own It’s passing in dramatic sighing Into the grand unknown Come take my banded hand In lace golden with time We’ll out walk all the living, Well, everything but rhyme So if we missed tomorrow And sailed out to the sea While the balmy breeze of the salted deep Sings up wet disease We could land among the moon beams And share a moment there While the silent sense that we’re alone Will whisper through our hair My Love, the world is closing In lace golden with time While the balmy breeze of the salted deep Will whisper through our hair and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Briliance! A real feel good poem, and I don't see many of those here! Wonderful job Kate "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
did we read the same poem? lol, disease breathed up from the sea- closing of the worlds, furling into itself. lol, yes what a sad love story i weave. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Oh was it, because it seemed stangly happy to me. Like yes the worlds ending but we have each other, come with me to the moon, we'll escape all this and we are together. I dunno if you say it's sad then... "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
umm i didn't see those . . . i gues your reaction just surprised me- b/c it is love but the world which we loved is going. i don't it had a bit of a 2nd coming type feeling to it when i wrote it- so you're right, it ends happily. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
OMG this is great! i love ur poems, there very good and inspiring. |
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