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Teen Poetry #8

I’ll give up my Heart

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-02-10 09:45 PM

I’ll give up my Heart

Loving you was easy
You occupied my mind
My dreams and mulling wanderings
Were all of you and I

It was the love I held for you
And the love that you returned
That has enabled me to live life
And get my lessons learned

The loving part came naturally
Well said and worded sound
The emanating feelings
From your eyes keep me around

I don’t know what else to say
Or how else I cam love
But surely I can answer
That it will never be enough

This year I have no Valentine
No one to play the part
But I’m willing to let you come back
To let you have my heart

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2008-02-11 12:23 PM

BEAutiful! its quite inspiring.

-jenna

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-11 03:00 PM

Lovely, simply marvelous

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

[This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (02-12-2008 07:41 PM).]

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-11 11:04 PM

OHH KATE DARLIN' the more yooh rite the more poem i have in my list of favs

simply amazazing!!!
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-02-12 01:28 PM

aww thaks guys, 'specially Krysti, that means alot to me that you would have it in your library- that my stuff is good enough that someone besides me would want to pull it out and read it again.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-12 05:27 PM

there is only one word to discribe this poem AMAZING! I love this poem so im gunna add it to my library =)

LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

6 posted 2008-02-12 05:48 PM

Wowies.
Great poem =] Wkd.

xxx

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