Teen Poetry #8 |
drugs or no drugs haha |
hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
the thing that inspired this poem was the energy drink ten minutes before klass and trying to fit 3 rugby player guys and two girls in a 3 seater truck and speed tue skool so we weren't late... yess we actually made it without being that late only one minute late.. and the teacher didn't even know haha. yess we almost krashed haha.. btw don't accidently bump the drives elbow wen they are turning haha kk so here's my poem wen I wuz sooo HYPER!!!!I think this is my very first not serious poem haha ~Krysti~ I'm high off life I don't need drugs getting rid of the winter bugs I got my apple juice and a Charleston Chew I look up, The skies are blue!!! sitting in French class teacher's droning, mind is gone under my desk I have no shoes on!!!!! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
omg, hunnie, this totally made me laugh. I know the feeling. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
funny poem but ugh...how about seat belts?! How about not putting your life in danger by getting in a car that packed?! Freakin this mommie out kid.... I'd rather you were late to school than to see kids splattered....be safe ok? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The poem itself is amusing. The prelude - I'm afraid I have to agree with SEA. That is VERY scary (and not in the least funny) stuff.. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Good poem, bad driving. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i love how they are concerned when i have done that too. lol great poem. -jenna |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
LOL! I love the first line! he he he "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
oh my gosh i love the last line- no shoes, haha that almost happened to me a few times. . . -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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