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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 2008-02-04 10:56 PM


I feel myself the greater fool
And cannot help but think
That my life is a diamond pool
Filled with sweet apple drink

I have my stories of sorrow to tell
But all are now behind me
I stood up, even after I fell
With help, felt my darkness flee

This is why I must rejoice
I’ve neglected far to long
To with gladness raise my voice
And fill the air with joyful song

Thus I am the greater fool
I work to chase the light away
Exchange seen sweets for gruel
Then, with this meager poem, for the love I pray

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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1 posted 2008-02-05 02:13 AM


yes!!!! I love your poems great poem Frank!!!
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-02-08 07:06 PM


beautiful, just wonderful earl, knowing who you are layers it with even more meaning.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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