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Relo
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0 posted 2008-02-07 06:30 PM


I know It's not Valentine's Day Yet But its commin!
For all the Romantics, don't take too much credit!


This Valentine's Day I bought a deck of cards
I just wanted a chance to be with her
I cut the cards to 13 to better my odds
Every card is a heart,
When I loved her from the start

The King of Hearts is how I feel with her
The Queen of My Heart is who she is
The Jack of Broken-Hearts is how I feel without her,
Just looking for a Queen
10 is the only rating I ever give her
9 is a naughty number when we're together on a cloud
8 is turned sideways since love is infinite
7 is a lucky number for lasting relationships
6 is repeated for my thoughts of shared sin
5 is the number of fingers through her hair,
held on to in the streets, and waving good-bye
4 is before play the games of romance and flirting just because
3 is the magic number when in mind, body, and soul
I want her complete
2 is all there are in the world when she's in my arms
The Ace is for precision when I always hit the mark,
I stole Cupid's arrow and I aim for your heart.


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-02-08 02:17 AM


Relo... such a sweet poem I loved it!!!
Krysti

Ri
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2 posted 2008-02-08 02:11 PM


Wow that is an amzing poem,so clever yet so sweet
=)

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3 posted 2008-02-09 09:03 AM


sweet poem. it reminds me of my girlfriend. =}
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