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Liscence to Live |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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Tired of it all, the whispering hate. Why do i still remain here, when this time it is clearly my fate. I could escape it all, but something holds me here. I could live in happyness, far away from fear. I could make it happen, I could pull it off! This could be simple, simple and soft. I'd be saving myself really, from this messed up life. Never again to be pushed down, always living how I would like. ~everyone pays the price that others charge. Nobodies perfect, so why do we prented to be? FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Emily Most people have 2 personas, the one they wear in public and a private one..in other words they 'pretend' to be perfect as you say..You need to be happy with who you are & not worry what others say or think, if they don't like you, they don't have to look at you! I guess what I'm trying to say is don't let the other you bring you down, fight it & you will come out the other side..hope that makes sense, and welcome to Pip, look forward to seeing more of your stuff on here.... John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
OMG! this is soo good! im amazed by your talent. =] |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I agree with John. However my resonse is slightly less rational. It makes me SO MAD that I and others around me can't get rid of those personas! Your poem raises a question I've thought a lot about and one that had me in depression for about two years. This is an emotional topic for me. Exellent poem! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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