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I thought this love would last.. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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this is not the type of poems i usually write but im really tired and lazy so im just rhymeing. lol This clouded day. this cold breeze. i wish this wasnt the only way Your love just seemed to freeze. Your compassion towards me seemed to fade Your blood ran cold The tides of my heart has seemed to wade Your desision seemed so bold I thought this love would last but i guess i was wrong Your love to me is in the past Now i start the break up song I thought you liked me for me but i was such a fool You never saw us as "us or we" You were using me like a tool Now your dating my friend I never wanted this I wish this love would never end But they always say "ignorence is bliss" My sun filled sky Begains to pour The rain of my sadness begain from your wry My heart now forever sore |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
well maybe you should randomly ryhme more often! this was realy good! it realy shows r talent (as some have said to me) FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This is Random?!?! What??? How??? This is...this is...this is... amazing thats what it is! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Yes Earl this is random (like me lol) I was just rhymeing stuff about a subject. but i have had this happen to me quite often... |
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