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Letting Go
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Letting Go |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Letting Go Tears running down my face Thinking of you Walking in a steady pace Trying to start anew Your death was a giant blow I'll never forget your face But in my heart i'll always know Your love left its trace My hands are shaking But i dont know why But now your new life Is now in the sky My heart has moved on now So goodbye and farewell I loved you so much I bet you can tell |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Exelent first post Falling rain! Love the freestyle ryme. Keep up the good work "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
that was exelent, and welcome to Passions! hope to see more! FoReVeR.BrOkEn [This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-01-2008 05:31 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Excellent First Post.. Love the rhyme and the emotion just seeped through every word.. Can't wait to see more of your work.. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Welcome Zach and a fine tribute & first post. Hope this helps a little........ You think past here There is nowhere to go Please believe me This isn't so The road goes further Than you can see I know it's true Because it's happened to me Tender words and kind thoughts Can never heal the pain But these I give to you with love If it helps to ease the strain.. And for the record, they know how much you love them, note: I said knew and not know... Regards John |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
beautiful. and sad. of course, in the way i'm saying it (yes yes sometimes i say the things i write out loud) it sounds very comforting. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
thanks everyone. i really appretiate your support. expetially john, it good to know that there's people out there in the world who are like you. |
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