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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-05 10:38 PM

written by the angels
and forgotten in the lore
the towers shine and burn so bright
you could see it behind the door

here are the angels
in there ever blinding light
every single moral and virtue
is never out of sight

stretching there shining wings
edged in gems and gold
silver swords by there sides
no mortal man could hold

bow and quiver on there backs
there souls can not be sold
theres never been a being so noble
or as clever or as bold

a call to arms
the seraphs sing
there mighty call rings out
forgotten in the sands of time
no traces will be found

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-05 10:42 PM

Beautiful Bryan. An exelent poem...yet again.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-02-05 11:13 PM

omg!!! this was awsommmmmmmmmmmmme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i loved it dude!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-02-06 12:57 PM

You are amazing!! that's all I can say.

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

4 posted 2008-02-11 01:22 PM

um...i liked it a lot, but...slightly distracting is the fact that in multiple places you seem to have misused the word 'there'...i think in quite a few spots you actually meant 'their'. If I'm wrong and it is exactly what you meant, I'm sorry for my assumptions, but...it distracted me from what you were actually saying.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-11 10:50 PM

wow love this poem!!

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

6 posted 2008-02-20 07:35 PM

This is a cool write, Telling by your name you like the movie lol Thnx for the good Read.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

7 posted 2008-02-21 06:21 AM

well actually yes i like the movie alot, but im partial to the book more.

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