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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 2008-01-31 11:50 PM


Without it All

The pride of humility
I lost all that I had
To gain so much more – poorly
Insanity, the madness of happiness
The peace, power and pride of light
Light bearing darkness, proud foolishness
Lord knows I must learn what others know
Learn to accept and to love my siblings
Before my heart is again covered in snow

A friendship of happenstance
And a group to change the world
Never accept that it was merely chance
For all played in my hands
Your honesty taught me tolerance
Insanity meets madness and while prudence demands
The game it falls on unwilling ears as my walls are taught to fall
Understanding love is bought
A friendship which is missing a wall

Now with many lessons learned
I recall to you what you do know
WitchAmandamy foolish world upturned
I ignore reason once again
Focus once more on liberating light
Remember the foolishness of men
Hoping friendship will forgive that – such a fool’s pitfall
But now understanding can be wrought between friends
I’ll remember what you’ve taught lest I learn – to live without it all


"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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1 posted 2008-02-01 05:48 PM


umm i read this but i dont understand completely what messege is trying to say. what is this about?
XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2008-02-02 12:38 PM


I understand...I think. I think it's one of those poems where the last stanza brings it all together. Like when you sew; the last stitch will hold the object together so it forms something. It may be talking about the way people loose things that they love or care for but then that thing goes away so they have to learn how to live without it all. hense the tittle. But, Falling Rain, It also may be a poem that only poeple who have experienced it may understand. And I don't know, maybe you have experienced something like that, it also depends on how you process what the words mean. i don't mean to judge you're poem Earl, but maybe you could tell me if I'm on the right track with understanding?


FoReVeR.BrOkEn

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-02-08 07:04 PM


umm beautiful, i love the name amanda, hahah i'm so funny.

-Kate

Earl Robertson
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4 posted 2008-02-08 07:10 PM


HA HA I put that in as a very small foot note as this poem refers to that friend, copy paste...oops.
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