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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-03 07:50 PM


Think what you will but this is not a love poem...okay well it's a TYPE of love poem. But not one about a guy or anything like that..It's a Friendship love poem...you know what just read it.. -lol-


Seeing you'r face glowing
with smiles, I'm so glad
you chose to stay for a while.
If you'd of left me alone
once more, I'd be lying cold
on this wooden floor.

I can't live with out you, I
wouldn't survive. If you would
have left me.. I would have
died. You would break my heart
to do such a thing, please
just stay a while longer.. I
would do anything.

In you'r hands you hold my
world, this huge giant world
of one little girl. I'm happy
you chose to stay and live,
I'm glad you didn't do what
I did. I'm proud of the choices
that you've made, I'm extatic
that you chose to stay.

Now we stare up at the wintry
sky, as we hold eachother
together; as I sing you a lullaby.




FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-02-03 07:57 PM


Great write! I can understand the feelings you must have had while writing this. Is this directed towards one friend? Or a specific group? Or just your friends in general?
Great job whatever it means!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
2 posted 2008-02-03 08:05 PM


well it could be to 2 different friends of mine i guess. Thanks for reading Earl!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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