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Teen Poetry #8

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justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-02-03 05:17 PM

I no longer have this abrupt feeling inside my head
I can finally control my pain
I can see myself
Im not dead
Im no longer stuck in this chain
Im out
Im free
No more cutting
I can be me
I see the scars
And I remember the past
But im stronger now
And the pain dont last
Im finally free
And no longer in need
Of the knife
I can live my own life

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-03 07:56 PM

CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!! ... wait is that how u spell it??? aww whatever! I'm happy for u. Great poem, it's realy good and meaningful for one so short. Fantasticly written!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2008-02-03 10:52 PM

Hey Hannah thank you for the reply and I'm glad to meet you and I think this poem is highly meaningful and it's for some of us that thougt the cutting would help but it just screws it up more. Thank you for the welcoming =)

~-Keagan-~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-03 11:08 PM

Hi im Zach. nice poem. i know how you feel. the feeling of being trapped for such a long time and finally being set free yeah its a good feeling =] cant wait to see more of your poems

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-02-04 06:35 AM

very happy for you, and its nice you put your thoughts down in poetry. you did it well.

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

5 posted 2008-02-04 11:57 PM

hey thnx ppl youre awesome
n youre welcome arch angel

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

6 posted 2008-02-05 10:58 PM

I realy understand this feeling. The difference between night and day. It's amazing and you put it down on paper very well.Good job.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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