Teen Poetry #8 |
low level depression |
wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
down low low in the dumps im so tired of being here in this low level depression my headaches my muscles are sore even my vision is blurred ive tried to stop the pain i always fail, never gain this is insane why is life beating me up? why is it so kurupt? i miss my mom i miss that happy feeling i miss being carefree i miss being me |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this is okay but it doesnt even ryhme. i dont know if theres any poems out there that dont ryhme but yeah. its okay |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This is such a great poem. The emotion is so strong, I can hardly describe it. I know exactly what your talking about. I wish I could say it passes and religion saved me but... Well you know what I'll do what I can. http://lds.org/ldsorg/v/index.jsp?vgnextoid=e419fb40e21cef00VgnVCM1000001f5e340aRCRD This is the website of the true church I'm sure of it. Check out the basic doctrines, follow the links till you find some way to get in contact with people near you. Email me if you want more help/details/advise ect. I realy do want to help. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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