Chris D. Lear a father of 4 taken for good

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Teen Poetry #8

Chris D. Lear a father of 4 taken for good

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-02-03 01:04 PM

With every breath I take

This life without you seems so fake

I seem to lose my memory of you

But I do remember this one fine day

When I heard the news I could not stay

So I left the house with a tear

with rest of my life going through my head with fear

To test gods decision,I do not dare

But why me god this is not fair

A Father at best

but never a pest.

My hero with pride

My dad,R.I.P.
7-24-66
1-22-05
I miss you

~-Keagan-~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-03 02:49 PM

its a good poem keagan. I'm sorry about your loss. i can see that you still havent got over your fathers death but writing some poetry will help. Look at that poem i wrote *if you havent looked* It might help... but over-all good poem!

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-04 09:51 AM

it was a beautiful poem and it is always horrible to lose someone, I don't think I could imagine the pain though of lossing a Parent

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-07 01:02 PM

I'm so sorry Keagan.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-02-07 01:56 PM

Keagan,

I feel for you my friend. My own Father died in my arms & the pain can feel intolerable, hope my effort below brings some modicum of comfort..One day you will think of Him & a smile will cross your face as opposed to a tear..
.
You think past here
There is nowhere to go
Please believe me
This isn't so

The road goes further
Than you can see
I know it's true
Because it's happened to me

Tender words and kind thoughts
Can never heal the pain

But these I give to you with love
If it helps to ease the strain..

Regards

John

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