Teen Poetry #8 |
Illusionary |
Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
Things only one man can see, They appear right in front of me. What is this I am seeing? Imagination? Reality? Wondering around as the birds sings, Deafly hearing the bells that rings, Staring at something that is too fine, And not knowing the pain crawling in my skin. Both my mind and heart combine, Still have things that I can't find. Not seeing the light that shines brightly, Because my eyes are just too blind. Day have passed and I found out what I see, It's not reality but illusionary. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Great write Ian. I can understand what this poem means. An exelent description of some of the most annoying things in life. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this is good. i like it. keep up the good work! =] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh WOW this was a great poem the flow was good.. as were the words hope to read more soon Krysti |
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