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i took a risk
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i took a risk |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is not a happy poem so if you like happy poems i wouldnt read it. please leave me comments i took a risk i told you how i felt i gave you my heart now its time for a new start i told you to keep my heart safe you said youd never go away i gave you everything now i have nothing left inside im am empty shell i found myself in love with you now where am i to hide? at first you took away my pain now your the reason i cant make it go away you cause the ache in my chest you make it hard for me to breath these tears stain my face my eyes burn and my head spins how did the begin? now the pain ends as i drift away to sleep maybe when i wake it will get better maybe tomorrow will be better than today maybe tomorrow the pain will go away |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Ohhh Jenna this izzz beautiful  Krysti |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
it's very clear and understandable. I love the way you made it flow in such a way the every line still stuck out idividually FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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