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young_blood
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0 posted 2008-01-29 12:33 PM


A Change In The Weather

I'm quite indifferent to the rain
outside the window, but somehow I feel
its effects through these brick walls.
Through armor skin and stronger will, I hear
the wind whispering again from miles away,
it's something like the low notes of goodbye.
If only I could find my singing voice to harmonize...
Jessica, this one was written just for you. I hope you enjoy.

[This message has been edited by young_blood (01-30-2008 12:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-01-29 02:07 PM


I don't know how to be indifferent to the rain.... it makes me feel like this



but I loved the end of this, it made me feel like I was watching two people in a moment, and that maybe I should look away...but watch to see if it will end good...

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2 posted 2008-01-29 07:08 PM


Thankyou for coming back.. really appreciate it.. i know you are missed here.. you have a great talent and your work is always wonderful. so thankyou!!... And the piece was amazing by the way.. i love how when you read your work you can always look beyond the actual written words and find so much meaning and truth..Please Keep posting.. because a talent as unique as yours is very hard to find..

Much Love,
Jess

young_blood
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3 posted 2008-01-29 08:50 PM


thank you both for reading this.  just as a note for everyone, obviously the last line is not part of the poem. anyway, thank you.
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4 posted 2008-01-29 11:18 PM


hehe I kinda figured bout the last line.. omg it iz sooo guud two have yooh back i missed your poems great poem like WOW
Krysti

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5 posted 2008-01-30 03:36 PM


ooooo thanks for taking the time to read.
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