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Teen Poetry #8

A Change In The Weather

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2008-01-29 12:33 PM

A Change In The Weather

I'm quite indifferent to the rain
outside the window, but somehow I feel
its effects through these brick walls.
Through armor skin and stronger will, I hear
the wind whispering again from miles away,
it's something like the low notes of goodbye.
If only I could find my singing voice to harmonize...
Jessica, this one was written just for you. I hope you enjoy.

[This message has been edited by young_blood (01-30-2008 12:06 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-01-29 02:07 PM

I don't know how to be indifferent to the rain....

it makes me feel like this

but I loved the end of this, it made me feel like I was watching two people in a moment, and that maybe I should look away...but watch to see if it will end good...

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-01-29 07:08 PM

Thankyou for coming back.. really appreciate it.. i know you are missed here.. you have a great talent and your work is always wonderful. so thankyou!!... And the piece was amazing by the way.. i love how when you read your work you can always look beyond the actual written words and find so much meaning and truth..Please Keep posting.. because a talent as unique as yours is very hard to find..

Much Love,
Jess

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2008-01-29 08:50 PM

thank you both for reading this. just as a note for everyone, obviously the last line is not part of the poem. anyway, thank you.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-01-29 11:18 PM

hehe I kinda figured bout the last line.. omg it iz sooo guud two have yooh back i missed your poems

great poem like WOW
Krysti

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2008-01-30 03:36 PM

ooooo thanks for taking the time to read.

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