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War Inside My Head
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War Inside My Head |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
this war is blasing inside my head dont know which way to turn either way ill end up dead so just leave me here to burn the fight to keep holding on the need to just sink away i have to pick only one but i cant make it today im trying so hard to pull through make it easier on everyone around me but its a struggle not to go under a struggle just to see what is right and what is wrong all in one thought numb living is what i long but that doesnt benefit a lot let me sleep so that i dont think of this war thats moving from my head to my heart once it gets there i must choose which way my path shall start the high road is the happy one but its also the hardest route i want to just get this nothingness back but its an easy way out help this hurts this war is equal tell me which way to go before i suddenly fall into this hole where no one can go and i dont die but worse help me only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
i dont like warz de aweful |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
yep exactly the feeling i was trying to convey only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yea |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I love this by u rebal angel.. really do.. I changed "Captive Emotions Tell Of Only Life" u said it was confusing so i changed it.. it now flows better also.. if u wanted to check it out n let me know what u thought then it'd be really appreciated.. |
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