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Teen Poetry #8

concealed the revealed heart

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-01-27 10:54 PM

the past is what ive become
the scars tell me what ive done
im waiting im watchin
but feeling nothin but anger
i h8 to cry it shows weakness
but its the only way to control my temper
forget me reject me cuz i will bring you down
i have no heart its concealed
you will never see me
its too dark where im at
ill never be found
the only way youll get thru me is to stab me in the heart
thats where the light is
open me up and youll see
read my book of life from the start
dont skip pages cuz then
ill never be revealed

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-01-28 09:22 PM

wow this was great..i liked it alot. ( i didnt know it was urs till after) but i did notice that ur other one got deleted b4 i read it. if it was as good as this one can i read it?

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2008-01-29 05:31 PM

hey thanks umm the other one got deleted cuz it said stuff bout killin but i wrote it b4 on here but i just added some more stuff u know so yeah i dont remember what i said on it tho

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

3 posted 2008-01-29 09:23 PM

well dont u have a copy on the computer or in a cuaderno?

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-01-29 10:07 PM

nah sorry i can probly write it again tho

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2008-01-29 10:10 PM

its okay... u dont have to, i just h8 it when a poem gets deleted..one of my favs from a friend got deleted when i first got on here and i trcked her down to get a copy...so i try not to let them go to waste..besides i enjoy reading all the entries in here and the title looked interesante so i thought id ask but u dont have to

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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