My Mistake (Sequel to Once Again)

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Teen Poetry #8

My Mistake (Sequel to Once Again)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-28 06:09 PM

I bottled it up for to much time, up until now I was doing just fine.
Maybe it was better when you couldn't see,
maybe it was better to hold on to me.
As you let go you finally saw what I meant, now by myself I still feel bent.
Wasting away with all the tears, every tear from all those years.

Pouring out onto the ground, why do I still feel so bound? Stuck to my life with no where to go,
how could this be; why does it show? At everything I seem to weep, how did I become so weak?
After all those years of keeping it
all contained, from my eye's they fall like rain.

Maybe I was incorrect, this isn't allowing
me to forget.
Everything triggers more and more tears, everything now is my worst fear.
Though I can't hide away I can hold
the tears back, just hold them until no one
will see; that is one power I do not lack.

Away in my room I will let them all fall,
but when morning comes I have to put up a wall.
Built only from stone with an unbreakable bind, I'll go to school where every one is blind.
This is where they can not see just what you'r letting go has done to me.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (01-30-2008 10:05 PM).]

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-01-28 06:51 PM

Very beautiful poem Emily loved it..
Krysti

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