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Tempest
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since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-10-04 06:28 PM

Atwixt the heavens
Born from skies
On broken burning wings he flies
Wrought from evil
Crowned in flames
He is the king of many names

With a single blade
Bound in blood
The wallmakers treasure
Brings salvations flood

Through the darkness
The seven stood
Willing to die
For the greater good

Peace with a dream
Is what the seven sought
The bells are ringing
The king is cought

With a mighty crash
The blade was gone
The king was broken
In the wake of dawn

It is over
And the seven stand tall
The bells are ringing
In the song of lifes call

[This message has been edited by Tempest (10-05-2006 09:33 AM).]

© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved

gypsyheartx
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since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

1 posted 2006-10-04 09:13 PM

I LOVE this.

It reads so great, and really puts a spectacular image in my mind. Thanks so much for sharing...
~Miranda~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2006-10-05 04:57 PM

This is amazing, perfect imagery, nice fitting title to

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-10-05 09:07 PM

Well, if you go back to the first time you posted this my reply is still there. I kinda feel the same about this poem as I did before also...

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->---

nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

4 posted 2006-10-07 09:41 AM

i think it was vey interesting. it was like fantasy. very well written.
courtney mary elizabeth

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since 2006-06-18

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5 posted 2006-10-08 01:12 AM

wow yet another amazing poem by you i loved this. tx for sharing again

hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

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Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-01-23 06:36 AM

wow, most def bringing this one back up.

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

7 posted 2008-01-23 06:36 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and im not even sugar-coating it like in your constructive critiques thing!!!!

Its AMAZING!

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