Ode to my Love (with a surprise ending!!!)

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Teen Poetry #8

Ode to my Love (with a surprise ending!!!)

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

0 posted 2008-01-22 09:18 AM

yes, i am a freak but i couldnt help myself.
another untitled piece
hope you like!!
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Ode to my love-
a gift sent from above-
G-d's perfect creation!

Ode to your blushing skin-
my guilty pleasure and secret sin-
I'm quick to be drawn in
by your tempation!

Deliciously exotic-
sweet with love despotic-
a gift from above
Ode to you, my love-

Ode to the pomegranate!

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-01-22 10:02 AM

U had me soo bad lol... dang girl.. Great write.

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2008-01-22 05:09 PM

hahaha!!! yay!!! someone fell for it! i feel so accomplished! teehee... i cant believe anyone actually commented. this isnt exactly a work of art... =)

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-01-22 06:28 PM

ROFL

Yay!!! um...he he

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

4 posted 2008-01-23 06:28 PM

hahaha!!! another one tricked!!! sorry, i dont mean to be rude but its really great. I read it outloud to my english teacher today and you could see his face start to turn red. then he was trying to hide his embarrassment when i read the last line!

i love poetry!

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