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Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA

0 posted 2008-01-22 09:18 AM


yes, i am a freak but i couldnt help myself.
another untitled piece
hope you like!!
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Ode to my love-
a gift sent from above-
G-d's perfect creation!

Ode to your blushing skin-
my guilty pleasure and secret sin-
I'm quick to be drawn in
by your tempation!

Deliciously exotic-
sweet with love despotic-
a gift from above
Ode to you, my love-

Ode to the pomegranate!

© Copyright 2008 Jacqueline M. H. - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2008-01-22 10:02 AM


U had me soo bad lol... dang girl.. Great write.
Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
2 posted 2008-01-22 05:09 PM


hahaha!!! yay!!! someone fell for it! i feel so accomplished! teehee... i cant believe anyone actually commented. this isnt exactly a work of art... =)
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-01-22 06:28 PM


ROFL

Yay!!! um...he he

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
4 posted 2008-01-23 06:28 PM


hahaha!!! another one tricked!!! sorry, i dont mean to be rude but its really great. I read it outloud to my english teacher today and you could see his face start to turn red. then he was trying to hide his embarrassment when i read the last line!

i love poetry!

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