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the clock of my life
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the clock of my life |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is a random poem i think it needs some work tell me what you think. lost is the way i have become things are coming undone tick tock tick tock that is the sound of my clock its counting down the minutes till my unfortunate death it brings bad news it bangs and bruises a heart is a heavy burden something my chest cant take its running out of time and im running out of rhyms oh god what is happening? its time for goodbye now im living my last minute how did it come to this? why did he plant that bomb rigth next to me? they said the threat was a joke how can this be? i guess im meant to die so goodbye to you all i yell i love you all as i fall its dark now but there is no light at the end of the tunnel |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
holy crap, this is....i mean...WOW! i love it. i think i've said this about some of ur other poems but u have no idea how much that relates to one of my friends! it's outstandingly....gosh there isn't really a word that fits!!! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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