Teen Poetry #8 |
Girl Fights |
*CaT* Junior Member
since 2007-12-07
Posts 46Oxford, England |
Arguments begin with lies and deceit, Also when girls pretend to be sweet. Perfect little angles can turn ever so mean, And the language they use is a disgrace and obscene. When you're standing fists clenched and they're all shouting "fight!" You must think to yourself that "this cannot be right," You could walk away and let them commandeer, Or simply get on with it and not interfere. Whatever happens you'll be friends again soon, Because good friends stay friends from morning till noon The ending is really lame... any ideas/improvements welcome |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
instead of Whatever happens you'll be friends again soon, Because good friends stay friends from morning till noon how about Whatever happens you'll be friends again soon, You'll be whispering and laughing to your own special tune and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
i do believe you meant "angels"...not "angles"...i could be wrong, however. Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
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