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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-01-23 07:35 AM

Ok Guys Here Is My Heart On Paper.. I Have No Idea Wat I Wanna Prove By This But The Person Know's Who They Are.. Plz Be Nice With The Reply's Cause I Know I Can't Write Sappy Love Poems.. lol..

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For All Eternity

If she told you she loved you
Would you forget my face?
If she thought she wanted you
Would you let her take my place?

You see I fell madly in love
With this guy I barely knew
It didn’t see it back then
But now I know it’s true

He lives a million miles away
And we haven’t even met
I had the opportunity you know
It’s now something I regret

I don’t know if he loves me
All I can do is pray
And write this sappy poem
And hope he feels the same

I heard your voice today
It melted me right through
To think my prince charming
Might actually be you!

If you’re out there and you’re reading
You know who you are
The guy that I met through a forum
The guy that plays guitar
The guy that does huge back flips
And lands in the pool
The guy with the trendy glasses
Which I think’s pretty cool

My bright blue eyes are crying
And only you can stop the tears
Tell me that you love me
Don’t be blinded by your fears

For All Eternity I Will Long For You
For All Eternity I Will Care
For All Eternity I Will Love You
For All Eternity I Swear

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-01-23 01:58 PM

ohhh Jess I loved this and YESSS you can write sappy love poems very well

I hope if he read this he knows what a lucky guy he is

Krysti

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2008-01-23 03:26 PM

awww! I love it!!!! especially the last stanza! so powerful! I just hate when you love someone and they dont even realize it.... it sux.

really great poem! and dont say that you cant write love poems cause obviously you just did! =)

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

3 posted 2008-01-23 11:39 PM

B.E.A.utiful i loved it. i love reading your stuff. it always inspires me. i hope he reads it.

-jenna

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-01-24 11:53 PM

It is sappy but it's right out their and honest. You have my respect - more for that then your great poetic talent! (Which is great by the way.)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2008-01-25 04:01 AM

Thanks Heaps Guys.. Guess the guy didn't notice or even care enough to reply.. I always seem to be left heartbroken but hey what else is new..

Thanks Heaps For The Replies,
Luv,
Jess

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-01-25 05:44 AM

Blush <.< lol. i think i know who it is...

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