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Tee Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26Belgium |
Hello all, been a long time once again that I've posted some work of me here, but here I am, back with a small poem I wrote for a friend of mine. After she did send her new picture to me, looking at her sad eyes and the colors of the picture, it made these words pop in my mind and this poem was the result of it. A bloody wall, oh so red Showing the pain of the love she misses The love she once had A dark eye liner, oh so black Expressing her sad, lonely feeling A feeling that begs for time to go back Tearfull eyes, no hope left Robbed from her smile Teenage theft Time to choose a different colour, moving to another wall Time for her to rise once again and not fall |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhh Tim it has been awhile since I have seen you here great to have you back.. Great poem hope to read more soon Krysti |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
good! I love the overall idea. really creative- unlike anything ive ever read here! |
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