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Teen Poetry #8

what the devil can do

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-01-22 05:59 PM

this is about my ex boyfriend. he broke up months ago and i just found out that he is telling everyone im pregnant.
it started out lovely
we were so in love
things seemed so perfect

then something happened
you changed into an ugly beast
you hit and rapped me to say the least
my feelings mean nothing
you never really cared

i eneded it
its over
i see how you stare

i hate you with all my being
you spread rumors
you love to see me cry
you really do wish i would die

so here it goes im giving up
you cause such pain
even though your miles away

im done trying to live
im done trying to forget
this is my last tribute to this dieing world
i hope you lives of joy

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-01-22 06:45 PM

ooohhh my goodness. this is amazing. I REALLY liked it. it reminded me of my friend

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-01-22 06:49 PM

I love that last line "I wish you lives of joy" Realy tells me somthing about the person (you) whose perspective this is from. Even though their heart is broken they still wish him happiness...either forgivness or love one of the two (maybe both)

Yay!!! um...he he

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