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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-01-19 10:45 AM



Wild Abyss

Sweet life is waning
Our time filled with blackened metal
The unyielding thing it is
Makes life seem short and brittle

Machines and monsters
They are what we create
Sealing ourselves in
And challenging fate

And who do we think we are
That we can hurt like this
Wild and rampant
No restraint in this wild abyss

How can we restore
The things we have lost
Or is it too late,
And this is the cost

We can only try
To be better than we are
It’s not what we make
But who we are


and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 2008-01-21 08:40 PM


hey there. good write. i liked it alot. i thought that the first stanza was very clever.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-01-22 05:32 PM


aw thanks. lol. oh it's so nice to have replies . . . and it kinda sounds like something i read from you before. ummm, lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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