Teen Poetry #8 |
The Day Poetry Died |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
So this ain't my best poem n i don't like it all that much but hey it happens all writers have bad days.. The Day Poetry Died Do you know what it’s like? Feeling scarred and hurt inside It’s what happened to me you know The day poetry died I never thought it would come to this I was shaking from side to side It seems I had an addiction That I couldn’t give up if I tried Words were not only wise But they also soothed the soul A title, a verse, a stanza They made my life whole I tried to give up years ago But without it I’d be dead I guess I couldn’t seem to stop Rhyming words in my head It’s a long road to ruins I’ve been there and tried But my whole world fell apart The day poetry died |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhh I love this hunn you are soo amazing Krysti |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks Hunnie.. I actually didn't like it all that much goes too show don't realise a good write when i see one anymore lol |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
This is too emotional for my words to form...i wish i could say something more but i really just cant... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Words were not only wise But they also soothed the soul A title, a verse, a stanza They made my life whole ~*~ I would think that there isn't one of us who, as people who enjoy writing, sharing, and the value of emotional outlets, can't relate to this poem. It's one of those, "gee, I'm not the only one who feels like this" moments. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
It’s a long road to ruins I’ve been there and tried But my whole world fell apart The day poetry died wow. just wow. you have always been immoveable to me. i don't know i have always secretly greatly admired you as a poet. i read every single one of your posts and wow, this one was just how i feel. it was beautiful. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
this is really amazing. youve just about summed up what almost everyone on this site feels... its a really great poem. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Quality read RIM. |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
loved it. |
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