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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-01-18 01:49 PM


your bags are packed
to leave this place
its too god forsaken
and you'll never make it
if you stay here

your leaving this time
and maybe you'll write
to tell me your fine

and as the memories fade
new scars will be made
and every one tells a story

your leaving here
to find New York City
where the lights shine bright
and you'll forget me

Ill fade from your mind
and fall from you heart
cant you see
New York City
is tearing me apart

© Copyright 2008 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2008-01-18 05:23 PM


aww, times are so rocky. it's one of the strangest and hardest phemomanon to survive- some one leaving.

-Kate

ps it was nice

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

fromme2U
Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2008-01-21 04:05 PM


Been in your shoes, but now I wear new ones and once again I am walking fine..
hope you find your new shoes too.

great job!

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