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Through Me |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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bite your tongue so you dont speak just sit in silence week after week well im so sorry you cant bleed through me dont give me all these things you want me to be dont try to change me take me as i am im not the best person in life but im doing what i can the shambles crack and the words come free heres all you've ever wanted to say to me lay it out for all to see just dont forget you cant bleed through me |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ummm orange, beautiful, and we all feel this, i think men more sepcifically. i think it's almost in men's nature to not try to change women- knowing how much they hate that themselves, but nice write i enjoyed it, and i'll say it again, it really is nice to see you around again. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
i like it! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
im not the best person in life but im doing what i can Wow dude!!!!! amazing poem guud too see you back on the front pages again  missed u greatlyKrysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
There is nothing more to say but that you are an amazing poet! |
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