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Teen Poetry #8

Love in its Finest Form

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-01-14 09:32 PM

Love in its Finest Form

Love is such a funny thing
It’s never what you think
Crossing all the roads in life
It boasts an iron link

I used to think I’d never
Have someone that loved me
But I was so much more than wrong
More than I should be

It’s incredible how it comes
Sneaking in with guile
I thought that you could ease into it,
Try it for a while

Love waits for no time
I don’t think it has a limit
And the only bounds it has
Are the ones we give it

I love to love and need it more
It is the air I breathe
I can’t imagine the world without
The havoc we would wreak

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-01-15 06:18 AM

I love to love and need it more
It is the air I breathe
I can’t imagine the world without
The havoc we would wreak

very nice. love it.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-16 09:38 PM

"It is the air I breathe" is my favourite line of all, another great job by you

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