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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-01-13 04:58 PM


whispers in the silence
somehow find your ear
even when everyone says
theres nothing to hear

so you shut the door
because you wont listen any more
theres nothing left to say

the bottles gone
and gun is cold
but you still walk away

every turns a wrong turn
on this vacant road of life
you dont know what your doing
your just trying to do it right


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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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1 posted 2008-01-13 05:00 PM


wow, hey you! i've missed you! loved this piece, i'm pretty much at the same point in my life. aww life, i love to hate to love it.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
2 posted 2008-01-15 03:08 PM


Wow I wuz wondering wen i'd see you back here great to have u back loved this poem
Krysti

rebel~angel
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since 2006-06-20
Posts 71
Iowa USA
3 posted 2008-01-16 08:37 PM


you know, i really think you are my favorite writer on here!  that was sooo amazing!

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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