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Teen Poetry #8

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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2008-01-16 12:46 PM

I know I hurt u in the worst way
it kills me every single day
to know you were the best I had
to give you up felt so bad

I just thought I'd let you know
I never wanted to let you go
but i'm not single I can't do wrong
all I can do now is share my hearts song

So just want to say i'm sorry I hurt u inside
I feel so bad knowing I lied.....

this poem still doesn't have an ending i just cant 4 the life of me think of those last 2 lines......

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

1 posted 2008-01-16 12:30 PM

Baby girl this poem is absolutely beautiful!! Im sorry i keep dwelling on it!! We had lots of fun and im sure things will work themselves out and make alot more sense sometime soon!! Im always going to love you and i know your always going to love me and thats going to be fine with me until something better happens!! Your an amazing writer and got a great talent!!

Love always, Chris

Derek
Junior Member

since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2008-01-16 12:52 PM

Very nice, I loved it.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-01-16 05:45 PM

sweet poet is your chris?!? oh well, my oh life is interesting. beautiful dear, truely really.

-KAte

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2008-01-16 09:45 PM

It was a beautiful poem and I know someday you will find those last two lines and they will fit perfectly

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