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Teen Poetry #8

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PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

0 posted 2008-01-14 09:15 PM

Time is waiting to begin
Try to start before the end
Watch the pendulum swing back and forth
Count down the ticks you have
Left in its course
Hurry up and decide
No one waits forever

Alexandra

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-01-14 09:25 PM

Watch the pendulum swing back and forth

No one waits forever

psh, wha, woa, psh, uhhh, woah!!!!!!!!!!!!! i couldn't even litterally speak (or type as it apperears, lol) wow!!!!!! i loved it, intesly, i didn't expect it to be so incredible. (sorry i have a slight bias to longer poems, lol, i think you may have changed that, lol) it was amazing, lovely wowowowowowowowowowowoow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate

ps, it's only fair to tell you that i especailly loved the pendulum part- that word it always strikes me (no pun intended) lol. love it, wowowowowow
and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-01-15 06:20 AM

very nice style. its very creative and sounded very good. liked it alot.

C.O.

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-01-15 01:09 PM

GREAT JOB!

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

4 posted 2008-01-15 07:05 PM

Thanks everyone!

Alexandra

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