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Teen Poetry #8

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Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-01-14 02:00 AM

The Mountain's Song

Battle-scarred and battle-torn,
cut down by my rival's scorn.
I join in the mountain's song,
sheltered in shadow, dark and long.

My moonlit metal, my faithful friend,
always ready, from start to end.
My singing steel joins the song,
an assassin's blade, dark and long.

Beyond the forests, beyond the seas,
beyond the reach of a summer breeze,
waits the rival, armed and ready,
to fight the song, strong and steady.

My midnight steel, longs to embrace,
the rival adorned with bitter disgrace.
My faithful friend, armed and ready,
to fight for the song, strong and steady.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

[This message has been edited by Assassin_of_Verse (01-14-2008 10:09 PM).]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-01-14 07:14 PM

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you blew me away!!!!!! this is the best written thing you've ever written!!!!!!!! i loved it library it goes. lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-01-15 06:24 AM

astounding. im speachless.

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-01-15 01:07 PM

AMAZING!!!!!!!THIS WAS A MASTER PIECE. THIS ONE DEFINANTELY GOES IN MY LIBRARY

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