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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2008-01-10 09:23 AM

Life can be taken
In the glimpse of an eye
Where reapers await
At bottom
At best
One's soul
Is precious
To give up
Is not the way
Fighting
For what you want
To continue up
Not down
These are the ways
Of a surviving whole
To be human again
Charished
And loved
This is what it means
To be the soul

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hunnie_girl

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Posts 2567
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1 posted 2008-01-10 10:17 PM

O wow I dont noe why but i really like this poem great write

Krysti

PoetsPlay
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since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

2 posted 2008-01-14 09:07 PM

I really like your poem! "This is what it means/ To be the soul" I love that line!

Alexandra

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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3 posted 2008-01-14 09:22 PM

oh shivers! lol. beautiful darling, simply wonderful . . .

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-01-15 06:22 AM

VERY GOOD! i loved this piece. it was amazing. i loved the short lines and the strong impact. nice...nice.

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