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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i wrote this one in spanish. i think it could use some work. it hurts to look at you everything ended so soon it ended with a boom! my life is a never ending quest its boring at best i fall much to easily i fall for them but they dont fall for me the pain runs so deep then again im to blame im put to shame i let them in i gave them the power to hurt im nothing more to them than dirt it is always my fault im the reason for my pain im to blame if i stop getting attached if i stop falling in love maybe ill be ok maybe ill stop causing my own pain |
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joe86s Junior Member
since 2008-01-07
Posts 10 |
i'm new to this, so i don't know what quite to post as far as comments-- but here goes i definitely get what you're talking about. i felt like that a lot last (sophomore) year in college. but, in the end, i've really decided that it's nobody's fault--he's who he is, you're who you are, and he'd be at fault if he tried to pretend otherwise. too often, guys will just 'say things' to make a girl smile or happy, not thinking about tomorrow, the day after, or the week after, when people get attached |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I agree with Joe.... Lovely poem hunn Krysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
wow this was really a nice poem I like the fact that many of us have felt like this and you described it to the T in this poem. nice write |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
wow, u don't know how much that poem reminds me of one of my friends. It's amazing by the way so keep up the good work! it all seems to come naturally to u!! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Very nice. One of my friends needs to see this (and will if I have anything to say about it!) if i stop getting attached if i stop falling in love maybe ill be ok maybe ill stop causing my own pain I've felt like this, but then some of if I didn't get attached to people my life would be a whole lot worse than it is now...oops talking to myself again! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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