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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-12-18 12:39 PM

Move On

I know it's been 2 months
But I can't get over you
I sit in my room crying
last thing I thought i'd do

I thought I could forget you
by finding more fish in the sea
but after making my way around
I realized you were the only one for me

My mom says I should call you
But I don't know what i'd say
I can't tell you i've been missing you
and that I cry for you each day

now if I did say what was on my mind
what would you do if you knew the truth
how I couldn't fall in love again
'cos no one I met matched up to you

your eyes, your lips the way you made me feel
I hurt so much knowing they're gone
and no matter how hard I've been trying
I just can't get up I can't move on

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2007-12-18 04:37 AM

this is awesome. nice write, and so true

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-12-18 05:39 PM

wow hunnie. this is great. youll figure it out some how. dont worry. itll all work out soon.

but really great poem tho

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

3 posted 2007-12-18 09:47 PM

i absoultely loved it. it is soo true. believe me you will find someone new. :]

srry about the spelling.

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

4 posted 2008-01-05 07:15 AM

really good write,
can definatley relate.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-01-22 05:00 PM

Love this poem. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

[&] she's a blood broken rose

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-01-23 06:16 AM

very real. those are the best poems though. but you dont need me to tell you that. lol

great write.
C.O.

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