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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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In Love <3

0 posted 2008-01-05 07:01 PM

New just Sounds so Cliché

The life that I once lived
Is now beyond my former reach
The only things I live for now
Are the moments of relief

I want so bad to hear you
To have you near me once again
I want to see you waiting
As my day begins

You are crafty steward
A master of many arts
But the key is subtly hidden
The key to open my heart

I’m not even sure what you’re after
Perhaps a new face to set your sights
You’re different then the rest of them
You’re on a higher height

My heart is scared so deeply
But it is more whole than I could hope
It’s almost at a new existence
One where I can cope

It’s a bit different to see you stare at me
When we used to be just friends
And now you long to know my life
My heart’s breaks and mends

It’s nice to know you’re out there
It’s nice to know you care
Perhaps our futures give us both
An exception far too rare

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Derek
Junior Member

since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2008-01-05 07:33 PM

you blow me away kate.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-05 08:20 PM

an interesting poem that lets you think about your relationships

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-01-05 08:24 PM

yeah, i'm still just trying this one out, well, tring to figure it out. lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-01-06 02:03 AM

I read your poem. I liked it. I read it again. I loved. Why is this? *quiet lol* Anyway, nice one and good luck!

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-01-06 05:04 AM

Kate Darling loved this one of my favs by you

Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2008-01-06 10:19 AM

aww thanks, apperently i seem to be writing eveyone's favorites of late. wow, i didn't know i could do that lol. thanks for your comments, it gives me hope and a smile so many smiles lol. love you all you make my day.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

xbrokenxlullabyx
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since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

7 posted 2008-01-06 04:32 PM

your writing blows me away

Susanna V.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2008-01-06 04:59 PM

yay

ahh doesn't it seem like so long ago when you stated??? ahh I remember then, your first day.. wai back when there were some of the old ppl:P now u and i are few of the oldies.. Well and Jess when she comes around

ahh so many guud yrs and memories here ohhh dear getting all sappy better qwit now:P:P haha great poem Kate Darling

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

9 posted 2008-01-07 07:14 PM

Great poem!

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

10 posted 2008-01-17 08:14 AM

this completely blew me away. Nice write

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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