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fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

0 posted 2007-12-28 01:09 PM

I came to this unknown place,
Don’t know the people don’t care about race
All I know is that it draws me in,
Showing me what different feelings people hold within.
I have by far read the coolest poems
Randomly selected and little by little I began to know them
Not by face nor by sound
But by their writing that leaves me astound
Hunnie-girl writes with her heart in hand
Sometimes heart broken, sometimes stuff she did not have planned
Mistress may writes a beautiful mixture of hate and love
And Seeker72 fits words perfectly together like hand in glove
Revengeismine is right on track
Taking revenge with his words to those whose poems are whack
Pen&paper transfers ink to pixels on the computer
She is quite a unique contributor.
Intellectual some say a conspiracy theory that make you wonder
That’s what it boils down when I read Abbeon’s words of thunder
Sit back and unlock what’s in your head
Because these are the times the word’s of renaissance runs red.
Not being able to think he can sing is his curse
But he is truly a professional assassin of verse
This is a site where people grow but first they need to hold on to the umbilical cord
This is where they shine just like the new guy wisdom of the sword who is now aboard
This is the site where you can be named beautiful animals and smart ones at that
Just like wolf girl, sexy kitten and cat.
Now Derek is the master of disguise
Leaves you thinking how can he be young and yet his words so wise
I read these poems which in my mind they amazingly perform
Through Rain or shine I read heartfelt ones of just another storm
Rebel angel has a heavenly crash in her style of write
Her stuff brings to the eyes delight
A professional inspiring poet who makes short comments is Artic wind
But maybe behind it is a refreshing whisper and probably done with a grin
These and so many other Magicians of words
Can spread their wings and fly freely just like birds
Even if it’s to soar just in the mind
Peace and release is what they find.
So what better way to unmask the heart?
Than to read or write a work of art.

Derek
Junior Member

since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2008-01-02 01:34 PM

I love this poem, I like how it's about all the different people in passions. Very creative. Great job.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-01-02 02:30 PM

Wow... I've been gone for a while, and when I saw this...It really made me appreciate all the writers at Passions.
Thanks for this great poem!

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

3 posted 2008-01-02 10:53 PM

fromme2U.

A very good poem... and not because I am mentioned ;-)

I did like how you have been able to grasp the emotional cord of so many poets.

Some say there is no talent in being a watcher, I beg to differ, I watch the world and the actions of those around me, while you are able to watch the words of those within this wonderful realm.

That is no easy task, I thank you for the honorable mention and also for a wonderful read.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2008-01-03 12:35 PM

awwwwwwwwww this was sweet i loved it and it is true talent

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-01-04 01:03 AM

Wow I wuzn't gonna read any poems cos of my lack of time but then u said u wrote bout me and i'm like oh no:P i gotta check out all the bad stuff that wuz mentioned... haha you proved me wrong Great write and it wuz nice to mention some of the great poets here

Krysti

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

6 posted 2008-01-05 04:21 PM

Hey doll.... I've been gone for awhile and that was a great thing to come back to. And yes, you capture the essence of everyone very well. You have made me smile

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

7 posted 2008-01-05 05:07 PM

Good to see you back Mystress May.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

8 posted 2008-01-05 06:21 PM

aww i am honored to be mentioned, i too am a silent watcher, and seeker is correct, it is an honorable talent. if you watch and understand people you can better deal with things and people in life, well done, beautiful poem.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

9 posted 2008-01-06 02:11 AM

I loved this poem so much, I had to come back and read it again! (Not just because I'm in it of course) Though now that I read it again, I noticed that your own name didn't make it it.

A round of applause for fromme2U!

And seriously, my singing could bring about the apocalypse! (And then some!)

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

10 posted 2008-01-07 06:31 PM

Thanks guys for the comments..

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

11 posted 2008-01-07 06:33 PM

Assasin I very much doubt your singing is that bad

Thank you for that applause I am glad you liked my poem.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

12 posted 2008-01-17 08:00 AM

hey this is awesome

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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