Teen Poetry #8 |
Code Blue (True Story - You Will Believe In Angels) |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Okay guys.. i was sitting in the hospital with my mum the other night so this is based on what happened that made me (someone who's never believed in angels) believe in them. Hope you enjoy.. Code Blue Watching a waiting Pleading and praying That the word’s “Code Blue” Are just another saying The days have shortened The nights more black The Ambulance is coming So please stand back Out of the ambulance Comes a sweet little boy He’s covered in water Clutching his toy Its seems there’s been an accident Said the officer to the doctor It’s seems this man and boy Should have been brought by helicopter It was horrid site sir I was scared to death But that man he kept on swimming Although he could barely take a breath When we got there the boat was turned upside down The boy was ashore Screaming Daddy Please Don’t Drown Together they wheeled the man Into the dreary room And promised the little boy That he could see daddy soon The man was barely breathing He’d been like it for a while The little boy was crying He couldn’t force a smile The doctors stabilized The weak and dreary man And told his little boy That they’d be with him when they can The little boy got scared With nobody he knew in site He walked into his daddy’s room And turned out the light He sat by his daddys bed And said a little prayer I pray that daddy will be okay And all this was just a scare I know I’m not a good boy But really i’m not bad But god if you take my daddy I will be so very sad I know it my fault the boat tipped over but i dropped my jelly bean snd i had to try and catch it Before it could no longer be seen Then before he knew it His prayer was done The nurses called code blue And little boy did run But something deep inside that room Brought a miracle that night It touched lives of even me It made everything alright Above that sick man’s bed Was a bright shining glow God knows how it got there He showed it where to go Five minutes later That man sat up in bed The nurse screamed out gleefully “Hey this man’s not dead” The little boy came running Tears rolling down his face Daddy you’re not dead I thought you’d gone without a trace The man sat up and smiled Pulled the cover from his head You couldn’t get rid of me that easily So offcourse I’m not dead The doctors couldn’t believe it They’d given up all hope They wrote deceased on his file And wondered how the boy would cope But the man and the little boy Had a secret nobody knows For trapped in each of their hands Was a feather white as snow Nothing will explain how that man made it through tonight But we know that angels do exist Even though they're out of sight |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
that was truly amazing, touching. beaten hands down, but I'll get better with time, haha. seriously, so impressive. Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
o wow hunn, you actually brought tears to my eyes. Such a solid, and beautiful write Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
That was one of the most beautiful things you have ever written, the best, bar none. wow. Inspiring. I've always believed in angels, it's nice to hear they let others know them too. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow very touching |
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Derek Junior Member
since 2007-10-20
Posts 38New Hampshire, USA |
I dont even know what to say, this was amazing, my favorite by you. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
everything's derek's faveortie today . . . lol. teasing teasing. lol. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Derek Junior Member
since 2007-10-20
Posts 38New Hampshire, USA |
hahaha, I ment this was my favorite poem of all of her's. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks guys.. its nice to see that i haven't gotten sloppy in my older age (pfft no so old but i'm feeling it) lol.. But thanks... |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
An assassin is a being of stealth and speed and prefers to remain hidden. But since I am one of verse, I openly applaud this beautiful poem. *clap clap clap clap* Haha...But seriously, nice one. We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks Assasian.. made me smile lol.. thanks for reading.. Hmm Where's CO when u want him to read something.. I'm gunna kick that young boys buttox lol |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i know derek i know, only teasing. lol. it's nice to have so much great stuff show up, eh? -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
I loved this one, maybe because I also believe in Angels. great job!! |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
this is amazing really touching something thats stupid but works isn't stupid |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
wow.. was the feather part real? this is not only an amazing poem, but also an amazing story! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
wow Jess that was beautiful. I was crying at one part and smiling at the next. Great job. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
That is amazing. (refering to both poem and story) I believe in the power of God to do such miricles as this, but it's nice to see it in verse. I to applaud this amazing poem, it's poet and the faith of the little boy that made it happen! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
Wow this is touching great poem |
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