Teen Poetry #8 |
Peacemaking |
StolenDreams Junior Member
since 2008-01-22
Posts 11Virginia, USA |
Have you noticed that when you push your problems away; When you tried to hide them one more day; There was always that one person who was there; That one person, the mediator who loves to care; Do you remember what he did; Do you remember treating him like a kid; How much knowledge did he share; And every time you met it with a dumd stare; Have you ever really heard; Anything he said, atleast one word; Does he like how you blew him off; Maybe to know that you lie each time you cough; Do you remember the words he said; Do you remember how he was right and you turned red; How about the time you turned a deaf ear; When you looked away and pretended not to hear; I bet that you could really care less; About how you left his brain in a giant mess; I guess you just don't care how he likes to feel; Soon you'll understand how what you did was real; So how often have you looked in his eyes; Look past the brown clouds of lies; Stare a little longer and then you'll see; Keep looking further into his past and you'll learn how happy he used to be. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow Jesse Love this and Welcome to Passions hope to read more soon Krysti |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Amazing poem. i like it very much ~ZachB.~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
StolenDreams your poem is amazing. It realy touched me today. Thank you. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wa-oh, we are getting some very talented guys here- i remember when it used to consist mainly of us women (no offence any guys who were here in the past, lol) it's nice to have your perspectives around. i just love poetry- don't you all as well? -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I know i've already posted a comment on this but this poem is really good. In your poem the guy that your talking about. Sounds like me.... |
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