The Word's That Cut Deeper Than A Serated Edge Knife...

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The Word's That Cut Deeper Than A Serated Edge Knife...

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-02-02 10:09 PM

Okay guys.. i had an assignment in class where i had to write a poem based on a song and i had too in someway interpret the artists meaning and make it my own..
I chose Leona Lewis's Bleeding Love..
Here goes..
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The Words That Cut Deeper Than A Serrated Edged Knife..

I closed off from all of it
The love and the pain
I’d been hurt so many times before
And each time I grew more insane

But something happened
The very first time I met you
The whole world stopped for a moment
So I could admire the view

No matter who tries to tell me..
I can see through there lies
I need you like a heart needs a beat
Like a liar needs a disguise

There is nothing greater
Than the love that comes from your embrace
And each day wouldn’t be the same
If i couldn’t see your face

We had something special
But we got lost in the better dissent
Couldn’t escape the jungle
Of love and resent

I can’t stand the pain
And I can’t make it go away
You cut me with a piece of glass
You left me bleeding while you ran away

But no matter how much you hurt me
I’ll never stop bleeding love
A Love that lasts forever
Like the promise of a turtle dove

I don’t care what they say
I’ll always be in love with you
It don’t matter if u tore my heart out
Just too see the view

The can call me crazy
They can call me blind
But I’ll keep bleeding love
From the scars you left behind

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-02 10:28 PM

that was beond beautiful. I absolutly love the last stanza, it's amazing! it just sounds so...i don't know...it's just, wow!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-02 10:56 PM

I'll second that motion! Your work is so awesome!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

3 posted 2008-02-02 11:18 PM

hey its me keagan and im just letting u know that ive signed up cuz zach totaly stole my poem and thanks for the poem

~-Keagan-~

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