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Teen Poetry #8

What would you do..

LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

0 posted 2007-12-28 06:05 PM

What would we do if there were no heroes in the world?
What would we do if we just sat there on our own?
What would we do if it rained every single day?
What would we do if the person you loved slowly walked away?
What would you do if women went infertile?
What would you do if people changed to what we know?
What would you do if the sun soon disappeared?
What would you do, if i said i wanted you here?

What would you say if i said my world had gone this way?
I could be your shoulder, i could be your reason?
Please just hold me tight through every season.

I could give you my word. That you would be my world.
You would be the smile thats on my face and no other person could take your place.

But now ill just daydream.
Cos hopefully i will have you.
Wrapped in my arms.
So cute and warm.
Cos for now you are hers.
& hopefully one day you will see.
That all i ever will want.
Is for you to be with me.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2007-12-28 11:02 PM

i could actually relate to this rite now

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-01-05 04:14 AM

Hmmm... This is interesting... Are you accepting the fact that "he" is not yours, or that you can wait? 'Cause those are two different things, accepting something and waiting.

Haha...Forgive me if I seem too nosy or if I interpreted your poem too seriously.
Hope to see more!
-Andrew

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

3 posted 2008-01-05 01:04 PM

i really liked it. it was a great write. but just a word of advice be careful what you wish for.

-jenna

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

4 posted 2009-06-11 12:37 PM

I just made this poem up lol.. i werent basing it on actual events, although most of my poems are like that. lol. But strange enough this one wasn't. 8/

Thank you!
xx

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