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Tell Me Why & I'll Understand.
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Tell Me Why & I'll Understand. |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
Hey =] Haven't wrote in, in a while. Lost the internet at home. So here it is the latest to my addition. Not very keen on it, but its okayy i guess. Let me know? =] x-x-x Tonight im leaving. I'm packing my bags and going. I'm fed up of tears and being hurt. The only thing i can see is you. The only thing i want is you. But how can i treat myself this way? Letting you rule me, and guide me through the day. I'll never make sense of it all. I'll never understand why? Why you left me here to cry. Don't say anything it really wont help your case. Why you chose her over me? Or why you put yourself in this place. The fact is you done it. You under-estimated me. & what i can do. The pain will heal. The memories will fade. I just never imagined us ending this way. You promised me. You swore on your life. That you wouldn't stray. But you did and now im calling it a day. I'm standing here & looking at my home. Picturing you in every part. All the things we did. & how we've so easily fallen apart. I can forgive & forget I can pretend & realise. I know you think i wont be able to cope. I know you think i will fall. Just remember you ended it all. The tears will dry. & ill start living my life for me again. You don't seem to understand. What you've done. You dont seem to understand That i can live without you. I just didnt want to. |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i love the last line. -jenna |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
wow, that was realy good. I could picture everything in my head like it was a part from a movie. Great job. Keep it up! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"The pain will heal. The memories will fade. I just never imagined us ending this way. You promised me. You swore on your life. That you wouldn't stray. But you did and now im calling it a day" i dont know why but i love this line in your poem. this is really great i love it! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow this iz a really strong poem.. loved the last stanza such great words to end.. Great tue have yooh back Krysti |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
Heeey i have only just got the internet back at home after a year! Thank you all for the comments! They fab! Thank you for your suport! x |
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