Obsessive Compolsive Liar...

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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-01-04 04:09 AM

So here's the latest chapter in my tragic life.. I'm just pleased that i can at least write it on paper to give you some kind of enjoyment from my heart ache...

Obsessive Compolsive Liar (To The Idiot That Broke Me Heart)

If this is the moment in which memories are forgotten
I’m walking away
If this is the moment when you tell me you love me
I’m not going to stay

I grew upin a small town
Where I met the most amazing guy
I loved him, he loved me
But he still made me cry

Whenever something was wrong
He was always there
But each time he managed to break my heart
And each time he didn’t care

Deep down i knew
He had a wandering hand
Up skirts and blouses it would creep
Until it found a place to land

So when some crazy pregnant lady
Landed at my door
And told me it was his baby
And she didn’t want it anymore
I standed there in disbelief
I wanted to scream aloud
But instead i invited her in
Told her to stick around

When he got home from work
I demanded to know the truth
Tell me did you sleep with her
Or shall i dangle you from the roof

I guess i faced the facts that night
I packed my bags and went
I knew you were too good to be true
And all those words you never meant

I’ve cried six million tears
But this is my good bye
I was born with dignity
And obviously you were born to lie

Derek
Junior Member

since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2008-01-04 09:44 AM

great poem, really nice flow to it. Gifted writer.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-04 06:56 PM

Wow such a strong ending.. beautiful write
Krysti

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

3 posted 2008-01-05 07:41 AM

best i've read in a long time.

very powerful, the ending was extremley powerful.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

4 posted 2008-01-05 01:12 PM

this is so amazing. i loved it. i know how you feel. just keep holding on and things will get better i promise.

-jenna

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-02-02 01:52 PM

it makes me think of one of my friends from South Carolina. She has the worst life possible and she has lost everthing. Anyway, I love this. I could feel almost all the anger and sadness just flooding from the page...screen... whatever.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-02-2008 07:18 PM).]

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