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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2007-12-25 04:13 PM


i wrote this last night when i couldnt sleep. idk how good it is tell me what you think.

i use to be sad
now im glad
i use to cry
i use to just want to die

then i met you
now i laugh
now i smile
you make life worth while

even though i dont see you everyday
you can still take my pain away
i know i might never get to see you
i know maybe this is just a thing
but you made me whole again

your like a shinning star in a dark place
you light up the world around you
some how i cant be without you

honestly i love you.....

though i know this in my heart
though i know its true
i could never tell you

you may feel the same way
but you live a million miles away
i write the confessons of my heart on this blank page
i could never tell anyone else they would think me insane
thank you for listening to this tale of sorrow
now i walk away to tell you another sad tale another day

© Copyright 2007 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
xbrokenxlullabyx
Junior Member
since 2007-12-25
Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.
1 posted 2007-12-26 03:25 PM


I love the last line
LittleWillow
Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54

2 posted 2007-12-27 11:49 AM


Oooh. I like this one =]


Well Done. =]


xxxx

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