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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i wrote this last night when i couldnt sleep. idk how good it is tell me what you think. i use to be sad now im glad i use to cry i use to just want to die then i met you now i laugh now i smile you make life worth while even though i dont see you everyday you can still take my pain away i know i might never get to see you i know maybe this is just a thing but you made me whole again your like a shinning star in a dark place you light up the world around you some how i cant be without you honestly i love you..... though i know this in my heart though i know its true i could never tell you you may feel the same way but you live a million miles away i write the confessons of my heart on this blank page i could never tell anyone else they would think me insane thank you for listening to this tale of sorrow now i walk away to tell you another sad tale another day |
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xbrokenxlullabyx Junior Member
since 2007-12-25
Posts 36NJ, U.S.A. |
I love the last line |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
Oooh. I like this one =] Well Done. =] xxxx |
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